Talk:US–UK Mutual Defence Agreement/GA1
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 13:34, 18 November 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:34, 18 November 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- Other nuclear material was also acquired from the United States under the treaty; only one material?
- Conversion missing for "5.4 tonnes", "7.5 tonnes"
- Section 1;
- Link "Hyde Park Agreement"
- Please explain its relation with the Quebec Agreement
- was not binding -> did not bind
- "was not binding" is correct. See wikt:binding. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:38, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
- Link "Field Marshal"
- What does "pain of death" mean?
- It's an English legal lemma. It means that the death penalty applies. See wikt:on pain of
- Modus Vivendi; is this an agreement?
Yes. Added that. See [wikt:modus vivendi]]. Nut here it refers to a specific agreement. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 09:38, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
The"Meanwhile" Soviet Union responded- Link "Bermuda Conference"
- in the Operation Grapple
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 07:27, 28 November 2017 (UTC)
- Section 2;
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:21, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
- Section 3;
- by far the most comprehensive; "comprehensive" in which sense? In the size of the agreement or in exchange of technology etc.
- training of personnel; by whom, US or OK or mutual
- There are also confidential intelligence matters covered by the agreement -> Confidential intelligence matters were also covered by the agreement
- section 3.1; para 3; What is "HEU"? Never defined in the previous text, please define it on the first mention
- Link "Herbert Loper" on the first mention in para 1 of section 3.3
- J.H.B. Macklen -> J. H. B. Macklen; per MOS:INITIALS
- Link Aldermaston
- para 1 of section 3.4; highly enriched uranium (HEU); has been already linked and defined before, dup-link
- para 1 of section 3.4; tritium; already linked, dup-link
- conversion for 21.86 tonnes
- Section 4; all good
- All images OK
- External links check shows a dead link
- Copyvio check 1, 2, 3 shows violation possible, but they are mostly due to quotations. So no issues.
- G'work, nice article. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 14:52, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 15:50, 3 December 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
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