User contributions for Himatsu Bushi

7 June 2024

• 18:5018:50, 7 June 2024diff hist +12‎ Mount Whitney‎ Improved wording to increase clarity and avoid weird logical redundancycurrent

2 June 2024

• 06:2606:26, 2 June 2024diff hist +13‎ mMary Hartman, Mary Hartman‎ I assume this is what was meant, but it is much better said explicitlycurrent

27 May 2024

• 16:3816:38, 27 May 2024diff hist −15‎ mDan Millman‎ →‎Early life: minor fixescurrent
• 16:3516:35, 27 May 2024diff hist −204‎ Robert Nadeau (aikidoka)‎ If the students I removed are truly notable, then please start articles for them - external links are not the right waycurrent
• 02:2502:25, 27 May 2024diff hist +70‎ Sumo‎ →‎Professional sumo tournaments: wording improvement + a tad more info

22 May 2024

• 01:2801:28, 22 May 2024diff hist −725‎ Robert Nadeau (aikidoka)‎ Bold change: No other teacher bio that I have seen in martial arts or elsewhere has a list of "collaborators". This is a non-pattern (just an excuse to link other people you respect?) A list of notable students should be included instead. If you are concerned with this article, see my note in the Talk saying what a mess it is. I will come back to improve it some day. Also, you misspelled profile.
• 00:5600:56, 22 May 2024diff hist +405‎ Talk:James Dyson (schoolmaster)‎ agreedcurrent
• 00:5200:52, 22 May 2024diff hist +15‎ James Dyson (schoolmaster)‎ notability tag

15 May 2024

• 22:4422:44, 15 May 2024diff hist +23‎ Ernest Mason Satow‎ fixed some bad writing and punctuationcurrent
• 22:3122:31, 15 May 2024diff hist −13‎ mList of linguists‎ simpler wordingcurrent
• 22:3022:30, 15 May 2024diff hist +53‎ List of linguists‎ some more info

13 May 2024

• 05:4605:46, 13 May 2024diff hist +14‎ Michio Hikitsuchi‎ →‎Career: word fix, add linkscurrent

12 May 2024

• 16:5516:55, 12 May 2024diff hist +1‎ Alexander Vovin‎ →‎Personal life: Various fixes, stylistic and factual
• 16:4216:42, 12 May 2024diff hist −9‎ mHiroshi Tada‎ No need for kanji in English article for this geo namecurrent
• 16:4216:42, 12 May 2024diff hist −13‎ Hiroshi Tada‎ Nihongo name tag
• 16:3616:36, 12 May 2024diff hist −281‎ Hiroshi Tada‎ The refs here are a bit of a mess... made one significant cleanup
• 16:0916:09, 12 May 2024diff hist +26‎ List comprehension‎ →‎Dictionary comprehension: link Python
• 16:0716:07, 12 May 2024diff hist +35‎ List comprehension‎ →‎Set comprehension: link Python

29 April 2024

• 21:5621:56, 29 April 2024diff hist +1‎ Harry Kiyoshi Ishisaka‎ more accurate and appropriate wordingcurrent
• 21:5421:54, 29 April 2024diff hist −34‎ Harry Kiyoshi Ishisaka‎ sounds too grandiose and biased; also fixed birth year based on Black Belt article
• 21:4421:44, 29 April 2024diff hist −2‎ mKoichi Tohei‎ →‎Notable students: Folks, don't put in links to an article about the wrong person with the same name, mmkay?current
• 01:3801:38, 29 April 2024diff hist +8‎ mLyle Campbell‎ →‎Life and career: time-related fixcurrent
• 01:3301:33, 29 April 2024diff hist +1‎ mCenter for American Indian Languages‎ →‎Closure of center in 2012: missing close quotecurrent
• 01:3101:31, 29 April 2024diff hist −22‎ Center for American Indian Languages‎ →‎History: got rid of a weird adjective, and fixed a tense problem

28 April 2024

• 08:0008:00, 28 April 2024diff hist +6‎ Zen boom‎ Sounds better with this word addedcurrent
• 07:5907:59, 28 April 2024diff hist +2‎ Zen boom‎ The causality expressed by the sentence was the opposite of what the writer intended to say; fixed

27 April 2024

• 07:4807:48, 27 April 2024diff hist −68‎ Makoto Nagao‎ →‎Death: without an explanation of what this means, it is meaningless to include here (also this was written in future tense, and now he is dead, and we don't know if he received this rank)current

23 April 2024

• 02:5002:50, 23 April 2024diff hist +15‎ mJoan Baez‎ added marriage end reason
• 02:4702:47, 23 April 2024diff hist +81‎ Lacey Fosburgh‎ added spousecurrent
• 02:4402:44, 23 April 2024diff hist +174‎ David Harris (activist)‎ added spousescurrent

22 April 2024

• 01:3501:35, 22 April 2024diff hist +3‎ mGraham Chapman‎ The group is not surreal, their comedy is

21 April 2024

• 17:5917:59, 21 April 2024diff hist −2‎ The Squaw Man (1914 film)‎ →‎Plot: it's weird to have this word pluralized when modifying "tribe"current

20 April 2024

• 18:0118:01, 20 April 2024diff hist +14‎ mAlexander Joel (conductor)‎ →‎Personal life: Just clarifying what is otherwise a little hard to follow

18 April 2024

• 04:0804:08, 18 April 2024diff hist +1‎ mAlan Watts‎ →‎Christian priest and afterwards: don't change last-name reference style

16 April 2024

• 23:4423:44, 16 April 2024diff hist +12‎ Category:User ryu‎ Trying to get rid of kanji. It is not appropriate for Okinawan. Don't know translation for 母語 but will look into that.current
• 23:3223:32, 16 April 2024diff hist +195‎ Template talk:User ryu-2‎ got rid of rubycurrent
• 23:3023:30, 16 April 2024diff hist −69‎ Template:User ryu-2‎ Same change I just made to Template ryu-1current
• 23:2223:22, 16 April 2024diff hist −70‎ Template:User ryu-1‎ After two years I finally got around to it.current
• 22:4422:44, 16 April 2024diff hist +777‎ Talk:Beru Revue‎ Please do not deletecurrent

11 November 2022

• 02:3902:39, 11 November 2022diff hist −80‎ mZellig Harris‎ →‎Biography: limit details about daughter who has her own article.
• 02:3702:37, 11 November 2022diff hist +105‎ Eva Harris‎ →‎Education: added notable parents
• 02:2702:27, 11 November 2022diff hist −26‎ William F. Buckley Jr.‎ Incorrect use of the term idiolect.

27 August 2022

• 03:1803:18, 27 August 2022diff hist +42‎ Rick Wakeman‎ improvement to the opening sentence

12 August 2022

• 11:3111:31, 12 August 2022diff hist −52‎ Ichiro Suzuki‎ →‎Personal life: It's senseless to try to explain the Japanese linguistics of this name in an English article. Just keep it simple.

5 August 2022

• 08:3108:31, 5 August 2022diff hist +4‎ mItabashihoncho Station‎ added link
• 01:5401:54, 5 August 2022diff hist +28‎ User:Himatsu Bushi/sandbox‎No edit summarycurrent

25 July 2022

• 05:3305:33, 25 July 2022diff hist −12‎ mMitsunari Kanai‎ this is a bit redundant :)
• 05:2605:26, 25 July 2022diff hist −287‎ Koichi Tohei‎ →‎Notable students: alphabetized list; very minor punctuation adjustment; removed Ken Ota, who is of highly questionable notability
• 05:1805:18, 25 July 2022diff hist −41‎ Koichi Tohei‎ →‎Notable students: TMI - info irrelevant to context and smacking of self-promotion
• 05:1705:17, 25 July 2022diff hist −15‎ mKoichi Tohei‎ →‎Notable students: kanji are available in target article, and are just a distraction here