Talk:Action of 22 October 1793/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:46, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- a lone British Royal Navy ship of the line; what is the need to mention "lone" because the counterpart also had only one ship.
- They had more, made it clearer.
- attacked the large French Navy frigate Melpomène off the coast of Sardinia; usage of "large", declaration of frigate gives the reader an idea about ship's size, I don't think a specific mention is needed.
- In the strength section of infoxbox, insert an {{nbsp}} amid HMS Agamemnon.
- Section 1;
- Link Vice-Admiral
- small 64-gun HMS Agamemnon; usage of "small" may not be required
youngCaptain Horatio Nelson- Link Commodore
- small 28-gun frigate Mignonne and 14-gun brig-sloop Hazard; use of "small"
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 16:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
- Section 2;
- held a council of war to
decided"decide" whether the action should be renewed - Everything else looks good
- held a council of war to
- Section 3;
- A comma after "Following the engagement"
- Everything else looks good
- The image used doesn't have a valid license. Please do the needful.
- No plagiarism found. External links OK.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:31, 18 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:09, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
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