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Latest comment: 3 years ago3 comments2 people in discussion
I do not understand the reasons for this speedy deletion. First, I would like to state that I have no conflict of interest nor connexion to this company.Second, all the statements in this article are properly sourced, and per my judgement several of the references are secondary sources which provide analysis of the company in the context of the market and technology landscape. Third, regarding the reason for speedy deletion ("Unambiguous advertising or promotion"), I find it unfair. I have taken care to qualify statements that are favorable to the company: e.g. " It is said by Akselos technology users" or "According to the company". I would be more than happy to include more negative views on the technology and company, but have not found them in sources so far. It is difficult to explain the motivations for a complex technology to non experts without mentioning its perceived advantages. I am of course fully opened to explicit feedback on how the text would be improved, in particular how to reduce the perception that the article would be promotional.Factfox (talk) 19:41, 28 June 2020 (UTC)
I accept your comments. I would say that it starts badly by referring to awards won, but I don't find it promotional in tone overall. Deb (talk) 08:32, 29 June 2020 (UTC)
Deb Thank you. I removed the mention of the award won at the beginning of the history section, it was indeed not necessary. Factfox (talk) 08:57, 29 June 2020 (UTC)
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Latest comment: 3 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Good start.
