Talk:Ang Ating Musika
Latest comment: 19 hours ago by Pseud 14 in topic Did you know nomination
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GA Review
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Nominator: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 18:07, 5 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Pseud 14 The review is now done! Hopefully these can be addressed :) Arconning (talk) 14:03, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 13:08, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
- I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Good luck to the editors! Arconning (talk · contribs)
Prose and MoS
Lede
- the catalogue of Filipino composers, change to a catalogue....
- Martin Nievera, Jona Viray, Aicelle Santos, Maricris Garcia, and Kyla performed as guest acts., April de los Santos is missing.
Background and development
- Early in her career, Regine Velasquez's music was rooted in Original Pilipino Music (OPM), which were dominated by "kundiman" ballads and bubblegum pop love songs., reword to less passive voice. Hyperlink OPM, kundiman, and bubblegum pop.
Synopsis and reception
- The stage design looked like a tropical garden adorned with grass and trees. It resembled a scaled-down version of the Philippine landmark Luneta Park., reword to a more formal tone.
- "Sinasamba Kita",, put comma inside of quotes.
- This is a song title and not a sentence or phrase being quoted, so it should be outside. The MoS is If a quote ends in the middle of a sentence, we typically put a comma rather than a period at the end of the quote inside the quotation marks. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- Ooh I didn't know that, thanks for letting me know! Arconning (talk) 04:04, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- Odette Quesada, hyperlink with Odette Quesada.
- Minsan Ang Minahal Ay AKo, lowercase k in AKo.
- "Regine's endeavor to revive Original Pilipino Music is very much appreciated and should be applauded as a noble effort to rekindle interest in our rich musical heritage., put end quotation marks.
Set list
- No issues, pass.
Shows
- List of concerts, showing date, city, venue, and guest act, pluralize guest act and showing date, possibly omit or reword city and venue.
- This is the standard header label for tables of concerts listing the dates, etc. It is not pluralized. (See other GA examples Bruno Mars at The Chelsea, Lady Gaga Live_at Roseland Ballroom). "City" and "Venue" are not omitted or reworded. Pseud 14 (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
Personnel
- No issues, pass.
Refs
- Please hyperlink the author of source [3] and [8] using Boy Abunda, and the author of source [4] to Aster Amoyo, using "author-link=Name of Wikipedia page for author".
Spotchecks
- Earwig and manual check pass!
Images
- Images have proper licenses.
Misc.
- No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information on the topic.
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Did you know nomination
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- ... that the stage design for Regine Velasquez's show Ang Ating Musika was made to resemble a scaled-down version of Luneta Park?
- Source: [1]
Improved to Good Article status by Pseud 14 (talk).Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.
Pseud 14 (talk) 15:20, 15 May 2024 (UTC).
- GA status confirmed as recent (May 11, 2024). Size, hook, etc. all GTG, although I am not sold on the hook being particularly interesting (did you know that something you never heard about is related to something else you never heard about...). I'd be happy to review a more interesting hook if any are proposed - ping User:Pseud 14. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:40, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Piotrus: Thanks for the review. Fixed some typo as the ping didn't go through. See alternatives:
- Alt1: ... that Regine Velasquez invited living composers and songwriters to her concert which paid tribute to their songs? Pseud 14 (talk) 20:34, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- Alt2: ... that the songs of Filipino songwriters and composers were showcased in Regine Velasquez's tribute show? Pseud 14 (talk) 20:34, 27 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Piotrus: Thanks for the review. Fixed some typo as the ping didn't go through. See alternatives:
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