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Latest comment: 2 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion
Arden's brother's RIP may help; there were lots of sibs and other relatives. It's at https://lyndhurstfuneralhome.com/events/roosevelt-warner/. Mother, Marjorie, is deceased, RIP. See also Dr Lena Hackett of Loyola Uni.; both spoke at TED-Naperville. Good to see the oil spill tech recognized - this stuff could change the world in a small but important way, and has already helped other scientists with other pollution fixes.
Thanks for all input - any further data is welcome. Implied connections are not encyclopedically needed, and spouse's name is noted but it seems unnecessary to include it. Tools suggest that the article is C grade, but my judgement is that it needs a little more substance for that, perhaps just a couple more publications, which I could source. SeoR (talk) 07:39, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
Thanks. Two used, the third must check re. external link qualification.
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Comment: 7th day after creation, seems stable, interesting topic and background, will submit QPQ Monday.
Created by SeoR (talk). Self-nominated at 23:50, 22 August 2021 (UTC).
The article is long enough, new enough, original, neutrally worded and carefully sourced. The hook is interesting and properly formatted. I've fixed a typo. I'm not totally happy with the hook: it's grammatically clunky because of multiple subordinate clauses. Instead of describing his as "American particle physicist, from Barbados", can we not call him "a Barbadian-American particle physicist" as the article does? That would make the statement flow more smoothly. Awaiting the QPQ. MartinPoulter (talk) 09:31, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
What do you think about this alt hook? BuySomeApples (talk) 22:34, 23 August 2021 (UTC)
ALT1:... that Barbadian-American particle physicist Arden Warner invented a magnetism-based method for cleaning up oil spills?
Many thanks both. Now adding yesterday's QPQ (I only had brief connections yesterday), Omas gegen Rechts. A good point re. the text flow of the hook (I included Barbados that way to provide a link opportunity); ALT1 looks good, but I think Fermilab is an important item - part of the interest is a particle physicist, and not just from anywhere, but from the actual Fermilab, one of the leading facilities in the world for that scientific domain, producing an environmental invention (even better, one which has already led to another potential break-through technology, for microplastic clearing) - but the latter would be one point too many. So I also offer ALT2 (ALT1 and ALT2 are fully supported by the sources per ALT0).
ALT2:... that Barbadian-American particle physicist Arden Warner of Fermilab invented a magnetism-based method for cleaning up oil spills?
Prompted by scanning dozens of candidates for QPQ, I offer two more alts, one highlighting the further invention inspired by Warner's idea, and the other less rich in information, but possibly effective in catching readers' eyes:
ALT3:... that particle physicist Arden Warner invented a magnetism-based method for cleaning up oil spills which has in turn helped inspire a method for clearing ocean-borne microplastics?
ALT4:... that Barbadian-American Fermilab particle physicist Arden Warner, inventor of a magnetism-based method for cleaning up oil spills, went to the same school as Rihanna?
Thanks for getting the QPQ done. Now all the requirements are met. Interesting to see the range of options for the hook. I prefer ALT2. It's succinct and grabby and gets across some interesting information. Thanks User:BuySomeApples for your crucial input. The Rihanna connection is an interesting coincidence, but I'd prefer to prioritise the scientific merit over the celebrity connection. ALT3 expresses a very interesting fact but it's a lot to take in for a general audience. Better to have a grammatically simple hook to draw a wide audience into clicking the link for more. Well done User:SeoR for improving Wikipedia's coverage of scientists. MartinPoulter (talk) 15:47, 24 August 2021 (UTC)
