Talk:Daoud ibn al-Adid/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by AhmadLX in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: AhmadLX (talk · contribs) 23:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
I will review this over the next few days. --AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 23:22, 26 February 2023 (UTC)
- Lead is too short.
- al-Ḥāmid li'llāh and al-Ḥāmid li-'llāh
- No diacritics per MOS (walī al-ʿahd -> wali al-ahd etc.)
- 'Hidden Imam' should link to Occultation
- Briefly introduce Qadi al-Fadil, Baha al-Din Qaraqush
A nice little article. I would have preferred some more detail, but given the dearth of info in the sources (I checked some of them), I think I can compromise on broadness. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:30, 2 March 2023 (UTC)
- Hi AhmadLX, thanks for taking the time to review this. I think I've addressed your points. Anything else? Constantine ✍ 13:00, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
- No that was all from me, and this is a Pass. Nice work. AhmadLX-(Wikiposta) 22:38, 10 March 2023 (UTC)
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