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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:15, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
I have to get these all out of the way... JAGUAR 17:15, 13 June 2015 (UTCDisambiguations: No links found.
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Checking against the GA criteria
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- I would recommend splitting the lead into two paragraphs to make the lead more balanced, per WP:LEAD
- Nothing on the Production in the lead, despite the section being scarce the lead must summarise, even if it's minor
- The plot summary in the lead is quite extensive
- "The focus of the humor is in a mince pie that brandy is added to in an attempt to make it more appreciable" - this doesn't make any sense, focus of the film maybe?
- "Reviewers mentioned that the film was too long" - but the length of the film (apart a measurement) isn't in the article
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- The assertions regarding the cameramen could be original research, but both candidates are included in the reference given.
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
This is another good one. Well researched and well written. Nothing major so it can be put on hold. This film sounds hilarious too! JAGUAR 20:56, 13 June 2015 (UTC)
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