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Thank you Xyxyzyz for your work on this article. If a reference describes the person killed or injured as male, please can they be described in the article as "he" rather than "they". When the gender is known in the references, the vast majority of those injured or killed in this article do seem to be males rather than females. But if it is a female, can they be described as "she". Alternatively, if it is a single person with an unknown gender can they be described in neutral terms as "the person" rather than "they". Reading about the incidents I sometimes found it a little confusing to work out if "they" meant a single person or more than one person.
Also the section on data describes the number of people injured or killed engaging in graffiti on railway property in New South Wales. But other location data in the subsequent section in the columns has been removed. I found the location data helpful to know which country the incident took place in. The location data doesn't necessarily have to include the specific city, but I think the country of the incident is helpful to know for Wikipedia readers. Is there a particular reason why the location data has been removed? Thank you also Drmies for your work earlier this year on grammar for the article. But since your edits Drmies there have been further changes and I feel some additional work is needed on the grammar. Regards, Kind Tennis Fan (talk) 03:08, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
Thank you Xyxyzyz for your subsequent edits to improve the article. Kind Tennis Fan (talk) 22:01, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
