Talk:MAUD Committee/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 10:54, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:54, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- Please introduce "Rudolf Peierls and Otto Robert Frisch"; nationality and profession.
- the potential military feasibility a nuclear bomb; I cant't get the flow I think you've missed something before "a nuclear bomb"
- "Use of Uranium for a Bomb" and "Use of Uranium as a source of power"; "B" in bomb is to be de-capitalized, or put on initial capitals for "source of power"
- Why was it called MAUD Committee? What is the abbreviation of MAUD?
- Can infobox be added?
- Section 1;
- Link Rome
- John A.Wheeler -> John A. Wheeler
- if he
werewas able - Use conversion template for "5 kilogram" "one kilogram"
- Frisch and Peierls produced the Frisch–Peierls memorandum in March 1940; please brief of the contents in a line or two
- "They reported that a five kilogram bomb would be the equivalent to several thousand tons of dynamite, and even a one kilogram bomb would be impressive. Because of the potential radioactive fallout, they thought that the British might find it morally unacceptable." Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:31, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
- More to come. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:36, 24 December 2017 (UTC)
- Section 2;
- A Committee was created; Why is "C" capitalized?
- It held its first meeting on 10 April 1940 -> The first meeting was held on 10 April 1940
- in the ground floor main committee room; Do you think that this detail is necessary?
- y with an i -> "y" with an "i"; to make it clear
- British born scientist; I think it is to be "scientists"
- Its meeting were; "meetings" or "meeting was"?
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 03:39, 31 December 2017 (UTC)
- Section 3; Very-well written
- Section 4;
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 04:07, 31 December 2017 (UTC)
- Section 5;
- to the president; isn't capital needed for "p"?
- His report was issued "on" 17 May 1941
a talentedan experimentalist- 25 million dollars -? US$25 million
- Britain did not have the money or the manpower -> Britain neither had the money nor the manpower; please ignore if the bit was said by Allison
- Link "James B. Conant"; James Bryant Conant
- its atomic spies
KlausFuchs; lastname - Lavrenty Beria's report to Stalin of March 1942; Mention "Stalin" in full, and link, as it is the first mention
- with the deliberately misleading name of Tube Alloys; to mislead who, the enemies, or for security purposes?
- "Imperial Chemical Industries"; already defined in the last para of section 2
- 58.1% confidence, violation likely. But I understand that it is mainly due to the quotation, so no issues.
- Images; Create proper sections for description and licensing of
File:Sir_Mark_Oliphant.jpg, File:MAUD_Report.jpg
- No dabs found, external link OK.
- Loved reading the article. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 13:38, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:40, 2 January 2018 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
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