Talk:Multi-scale camouflage/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Chiswick Chap in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 11:06, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:24, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
Will get to this shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 11:06, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
Comments
- Lead;
- with work by U.S. Army officer Timothy O'Neill; rank of Neill please
- Done.
- CADPAT; mention the full abbreviation on the first mention
- Done.
- MARPAT; mention the full abbreviation on the first mention
- Done.
- Section 1;
doesmay not see the pattern optimally
- Used 'will', there's no doubt about it as the pattern will be the wrong scale for their distance.
- and they do so extremely effectively; remove this, not clear POV
- Repeated ref for clarity, added quote in ref, it's reliably cited.
- fractal Vegetato pattern; here fractal is dup-linked
- Removed.
- 2003–4 -> 2003–2004; per MOS:DATERANGE
- Section 2;
small(2 inch) squares; use {{convert}} for 2 inch
- Done.
- Dup-links in section 2.5; Flecktarn, CADPAT, MARPAT, patterns in nature
- Removed.
- After the section 2.5, I suggest to use {{clear}} so that the following sections do not club with the former.
- Done.
- 0% confidence, good work.
- Thanks.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 05:11, 25 April 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: I've addressed all comments to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:34, 26 April 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 01:39, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 05:24, 27 April 2017 (UTC)
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