Talk:The Proclamation of Dušan's Law Codex

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:52, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 17:52, 24 April 2016 (UTC)

Impressive work. Here are my comments:

• Lead:

• As the article is in English, I think it would be more proper to say The Proclamation of Dušan's Law Codex (Serbian: Proglašenje Dušanovog zakonika). Possibly we can do the same for note "a".

• Historical background:

• most powerful and able rulers I hope the NPOV is not challenged when you say "able". What do the sources say?
• Link "Serb" in the first line, not the second.
• Can we link or explain "law codex"?

• Preparation and composition:

• Can you add a word on who Svetozar Gvozdić was, as you do for Milan Kapetanović? This is a redlink.
• The Coronation of Tsar Dušan (Krunisanje Cara Dušana) "The Coronation of Tsar Dušan (Serbian: Krunisanje Cara Dušana)"
• Dušan's German mercenaries, who line the doors of the church as he exits It should be clear that you are referring to the situation in the painting.
• The painting was done en plein air. Would be good to add a word on what the term means here itself, as per [1].

Rest looks good. No copyvio detected, images look fine and are properly licensed. The above points addressed, I would be glad to promote this. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 04:05, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

All done. Thanks for the review! 23 editor (talk) 22:31, 26 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks. I think the article is ready for promotion now. Excellent job! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 04:19, 27 April 2016 (UTC)