Talk:Toronto propane explosion

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Imrpovements

Latest comment: 14 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I'm just gonna list some things I want to improve on this article.

I'd like to shorten or simplify the content under the "Aftermath" heading, perhaps adding subheadings "2008" and "2009" or just a "Recent developments" heading.
Revise the content under "Possible causes". I don't like the word "possible" in there, I'll see how to reword it.
A general update of the article, seeing as to how the explosion happened a year ago now.

I'll try to do all this this week, I've forgotten about this article until now heh.--Richard (Talk - Contribs) 12:55, 10 August 2009 (UTC)

October 2009 Article Cleanup

Latest comment: 14 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

I cleaned up alot of the tense issues with the article and removed some duplicated information. The article needs to be given a good once over as there is alot more that can be cut and condensed. I have tagged it for Grammar and for Cleanup. Eja2k (talk) 08:28, 26 October 2009 (UTC)

Shockwave

Latest comment: 14 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

The article does not mention the shockwave that occurred after the blast. I would add information about it, but I can't find a source that doesn't lead to another video of the incident which I would rather avoid. NorthernThunder (talk) 21:43, 21 January 2010 (UTC)