Talk:William Sinclair-Burgess/GA1
Latest comment: 7 years ago by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 09:29, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 09:29, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
- Section 1;
- A comma (,) after "England" in "in Longsight, Manchester, England to a shipping merchant,"
- George Burgess, was a minister, and immigrated to New Zealand; please clarify the term minister, because sometimes it may taken as a government minister
- Section 2;
- Link South Canterbury Mounted Rifles
- Link 16th (Waikato) Regiment
- A comma (,) after "August 1914"
- Some data on Geelong, type and country
- A comma (,) after "During the Gallipoli Campaign"
- Better mention that Légion d’honneur is the highest order by France
- This French award is uncommonly awarded to New Zealanders; this sentence is unnecessary because the same is explained in following lines with the count. So it explains that it is uncommonly awarded.
- he became director of military intelligence and training for three months before being promoted to colonel; how being the director and the training are linked, this is a bit confusing, please reword
- What is the position of "Commandant of the New Zealand Military Forces" presently known as? Please mention that
- Section 3; all good
- Lead;
- All images are properly licensed.
- Copyvio detector show 69.4% possible violation, I don't think it is Wikipedia mirror. Please check
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:54, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Thanks for the review, all points addressed or responded to. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 03:59, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 12:59, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
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