Template:Did you know nominations/Frankie Edgar vs. Gray Maynard
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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:06, 31 August 2011 (UTC)
Frankie Edgar vs. Gray Maynard
- ... that in the Frankie Edgar vs. Gray Maynard bouts, speed is pitted against brawn?
Created/expanded by James26 (talk). Self nom at 11:23, 14 August 2011 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that in the Frankie Edgar vs. Gray Maynard, speed is put against brawn?
- Any hookier? Length and date seem to be okay, as does referencing. Images seem to be fine. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:54, 25 August 2011 (UTC)
The proposed ALT1 hook is good (length, date, referenced, etc.). However, it's a little confusing – shouldn't it read "... that in the Frankie Edgar vs. Gray Maynard bouts, speed is put against brawn?" (I feel like the word "bouts" is missing, because otherwise it's grammatically incorrect).Jrcla2 (talk) 15:42, 25 August 2011 (UTC)- I think it has been dealt with in the rephrased original. I like pitted instead of put, too. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:57, 26 August 2011 (UTC)
- We really can't run a hook like that. I pulled it from the prep area. NW (Talk) 02:42, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- Why can't we? Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:16, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
- ALT2:
- ... that his first fight against Gray Maynard was "a turning point" in Frankie Edgar's career?
- Better? Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:48, 30 August 2011 (UTC)
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