Talk:Harajuku Lovers Tour

I have not come across many "negative" reviews from newspaper columnists from ANY of Gwen's concerts supporting L.A.M.B. I think some proof needs to be provided, or the bias needs to be eliminated.

Her tour has really got negative reviews, unfortunately, not any of her first three concert dates received positive review, saying that it should have been other way round that Gwen should have been opening act for Black Eyed Peas. I don't know where you read your tour reviews, but here are few. [1][2][3][4][5][6]Just google "Gwen Stefani Tour" and you will get lot's of reviews, the reviews from fans are not as trust worthy as from real magazine contributors, fans will always say positive things about their idols.

Gwen has got positive feedback as well, all her concerts in LA received great reviews, but because this is not a Gwen Stefani fan forum, I think we should write things as they are. And at the moment her concert reviews are not same as they were when she was touring with No Doubt.

--L.a.m.b 22:28, 1 November 2005 (UTC)

Harajuku Lovers Live covers much the same ground as this article; it seems logical that it be merged as a section in this article, lest both articles remain stubby. ShadowHalo 03:41, 19 June 2007 (UTC)

This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 01:36, 9 November 2007 (UTC)

I have a reference site, http://www.livedaily.com/news/8869.html, for the tour dates, but I have no clue how to properly cite it. Can anybody help? (If anybody looks at this page...) —Preceding unsigned comment added by EsocksLAMB (talk • contribs) 02:58, 24 January 2008 (UTC)

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 03:45, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

References

• 3 dead links

   Done

• A few issues with the works. MTV, for example, is not a magazine and should not be in italics. Make sure this type of issue is fixed throughout the article.

   Done

Lead

• The Harajuku Lovers Tour was the first solo concert tour of American recording artist Gwen Stefani, which began in October 2005 in support of her debut studio album Love. Angel. Music. Baby. (2004). --> The Harajuku Lovers Tour was the first solo concert tour of American recording artist Gwen Stefani. The tour began ran through October to November 2005, to support her debut studio album Love. Angel. Music. Baby. (2004).

   Done

• Although Stefani embarked on multiple tours with her band No Doubt, she initially opt not to participate in a tour to promote her album, an attitude that the singer eventually abandoned due to the commercial success of Love. Angel. Music. Baby.. --> Although Stefani embarked on multiple tours with her band No Doubt, she initially opt not to participate in a tour to promote her album; an attitude that the singer eventually abandoned due to the commercial success of Love. Angel. Music. Baby.. --> Also feels like a word is missing between here "she initially opt not to participate".

   Not done The sentence is correct as it is.

• It was first announced on June 27, 2005. --> Not important to the lead.

   Done

• brought in --> Very odd choice of wording.

   Done Replaced it with recruited.

• such as the musical material --> such as its musical material

   Done I removed it.

• A video album sponsoring --> How does a video album sponsor a tour?

   Done Removed.

• Having been released in DVD format in conjunction with her 2006 album The Sweet Escape, the album went on to acquire gold and platinum certifications from the Australian Recording Industry Association and the Canadian Recording Industry Association, respectively. --> The information of how it sold is irrelevant to this article.

   Done Removed.

Broadcast and recordings

• Should be more specific about what concert was done. Not just "in late November 2005"

   Not done It doesn't specify which concerts were filmed.

• Also, Stefani, not Gwen Stefani

   Done

Set list

• Source for this information?

   Done

Overall

• Overall, the article is pretty well done.
• Do you think any more pictures from the tour should be squeezed into the article?

  I added a picture in the Broadcast and recordings section.

I believed I have addressed all of the issues. :) —DAP388 (talk) 03:09, 17 July 2012 (UTC)

• All issues have been addressed. I am passing the article! Great work! Sorry for the wait; I don't know if you checked my talk page or not, but I had surgery on the 17th and I have been recovering. Statυs (talk) 03:08, 20 July 2012 (UTC)

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