Talk:Jurong West

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Allkayloh in topic Request for review of language.

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Request for review of language.

To anyone with A1 for O level English, or at least a C6 for O level English, please help me refine the Politics section of this page, to make the language appropriate for all age groups. The first draft sounds very sexual. I've already tried to neutralise it. But if possible, please help to make it more age-appropriate. So that it sounds like a textbook paragraph, rather than a sex novel. Thanks. Allkayloh (talk) 09:32, 7 January 2019 (UTC)